Poem entitled "Whispers of Choices"

[skapar]

entitle "Whispers of Choices" | created date "feb-10-2024" | by: Skapar
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"Where should I go?
Where should I go?
Two paths lead me onward,
Which way may I go?

I need someone to talk to
Who can give advice.
I want to proceed in a direction
Where I can receive good advice.

There are thoughts, like whispers signed,
The barriers in my mind, gracefully thinning.
I want to express myself freely,
Without any doubt in the ways I choose.

I choose, I choose."
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Pls comment feedback guys any thoughts of you?

 

[Charles Manson]

"There are thoughts that clear my mind,
The barriers in my mind are vanishing."

Di ako expert sa paggawa ng poem pero na-awk-awkward akong basahin to but overall maganda sya. And mas maganda kung nasa "Art & Literature" section to.

 

[skapar]

"There are thoughts that clear my mind,
The barriers in my mind are vanishing."

Di ako expert sa paggawa ng poem pero na-awk-awkward akong basahin to but overall maganda sya. And mas maganda kung nasa "Art & Literature" section to.

wow thanks lods... haha

by the way , yung target ko sana dyan dito sa section..

"There are thoughts that clear my mind,
The barriers in my mind are vanishing."


merong ideas/advice na maka clear sa aning mind na inisip
and yung mga nakabagabag sa isipan ay mawawala ..

wow thanks lods... haha

by the way , yung target ko sana dyan dito sa section..

"There are thoughts that clear my mind,
The barriers in my mind are vanishing."


merong ideas/advice na maka clear sa aning mind na inisip
and yung mga nakabagabag sa isipan ay mawawala ..

edit ko nalang ito lods

There are thoughts, like whispers signed,
The barriers in my mind, gracefully thinning