Poems Didn't Give up

[Bithoben]

Didn't Give up, I guess​

By Bit-ho-BEN;
(Note: MAY Not based in author's true life)

I tried to give up music,
Played and learned piano,
But can't stop the habit of playing it in illusion,
Tapping my fingers in any desk in my sight.

I tried to give up that thing,
Saved money,
But can't stop spending other thing,
Now, can't buy that thing.

I tried to give up hope,
Cause I said so,
But can't stop worrying,
Luckily, made it barely alive.

I tried to give up for her,
She had someone,
But can't stop thinking of her,
In the end, I had to move on.

I tried to give up my ambition,
Failed at once,
But that didn't stop me,
My future were different at all.

I tried to give up faith,
To think I was abandoned,
But thanks I found a sign,
Redemption was gained.

I'm probably not mistaken
I'm sure I'm not mistaken
I guess.

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• Your'e free to interpret it.
• Just sharing...
• Thanks and you are all welcome.
• Informal poem

 

[Deleted member 1954679]

sa title pa lang TS, iba agad nasa isip ko
never gonna give you up HAHAHA

 

[Bithoben]

sa title pa lang TS, iba agad nasa isip ko
never gonna give you up HAHAHA

Haha, Rick rolled lodi. Hahaha,.

 

[Dismal]

Salamat sa pangaral na ito

 

[Bithoben]

Salamat sa pangaral na ito

Your welcome lods.

 

[Yu Ijin]

Welcome to the fallout
Welcome to resistance
The tension is here
The tension is here

Maybe redemption has stories to tell
Maybe forgiveness is right where you fell
Where can you run to escape from yourself?
Where you gonna go? Where you gonna go?
Salvation is here

- Dare you to move by switchfoot


Good thing you didn't lose your faith TS.
Laban lang.