Closed Fighting and Failing

[Somnolent]

I run as fast as i can, but my legs are weak
I call him, telling him to hold on
He shakes his head no
Facing the wrong way
Dropping out of sight
I hurry to the railings
The air around me begins to warm up
Little beads of sweat fall into my eyes
I’m having difficulty to concentrate
The curious part of my brain nags at me
My legs give out, I collapse
And HE'S GONE.

-N.C


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[JaQ2169]

wow, such eloquence!
powerful play of words...
can't wait for more, please.

 

[lunatic]

Nice galing putol ba to?

 

[Somnolent]

wow, such eloquence!
powerful play of words...
can't wait for more, please.

Whoa! Calm your hormones! *JOKE*

Thank you for liking my words and thank you for saying this. I know I haven't been updating at all, real life kinda killed all my creativity. I made efforts to start writing again but they weren't enough. Sorry if this message is overwhelming, you made me realize how long I had been neglecting writing.

Goodevening ^___^

 

[Somnolent]

Nice galing putol ba to?

Hi! Thank you.
Actually, panaginip ko kasi yan hindi ko na naituloy kasi nagising na ako at wala na siya. hahaha

 

[JaQ2169]

I kinda' like the style, not superfluous, not heavy, unpretentious, vividly evoking true emotions...
it's like watching a movie...noh?

 

[Somnolent]

I kinda' like the style, not superfluous, not heavy, unpretentious, vividly evoking true emotions...
it's like watching a movie...noh?

Wow. I'll take that as a compliment 'coz I haven't posted anything in a while. I'm saving my writings for later.

 

[lunatic]

Hi! Thank you.
Actually, panaginip ko kasi yan hindi ko na naituloy kasi nagising na ako at wala na siya. hahaha

Hello youre welcome
So may part 2 pa pala to? Abangan ko nga.. by the way sino kaya sya? Haha

 

[JaQ2169]

of course, it's a compliment.
so old na rin ito?
productive ka naman pala while sleeping, sino ba gumising sayo? ....hahaha jk
when ba yang later mo? para naman akong may sakit na naghihintay ng cure
sa mga panulat mo....er
ganto kasi feeling ko right now...

Alas!
the little light of dusk gave way,
to the looming darkness, but stays,
to beacon this wanting illusion,
succumbed to slumber,
hoping to remember,
the lost, the strays,
the unfound, the sick,
waiting for the cure.

no poetic metre.
ars longa, vita brevis...

 

[10reason]

ganda ng concept mam

 

[Phc - frenzufficiale]

The story is beautifully made kahit medyo bitin pero very emotions napakaganda ng mensahe...

 

[Somnolent]

Hello youre welcome
So may part 2 pa pala to? Abangan ko nga.. by the way sino kaya sya? Haha

No part 2! Hahaha.
Who? The imaginary person? Irdk~

 

[Somnolent]

ganda ng concept mam

Hi, Thanks! Yours, too.

 

[Somnolent]

The story is beautifully made kahit medyo bitin pero very emotions napakaganda ng mensahe...

Thank you. :>

 

[Somnolent]

of course, it's a compliment.
so old na rin ito?
productive ka naman pala while sleeping, sino ba gumising sayo? ....hahaha jk
when ba yang later mo? para naman akong may sakit na naghihintay ng cure
sa mga panulat mo....er
ganto kasi feeling ko right now...

Alas!
the little light of dusk gave way,
to the looming darkness, but stays,
to beacon this wanting illusion,
succumbed to slumber,
hoping to remember,
the lost, the strays,
the unfound, the sick,
waiting for the cure.

no poetic metre.
ars longa, vita brevis...

I'm more fond of a freeverse, no poetic metre as well. No, you were wrong! i usually procrastinate hindi ako productive na tao. And I lurks here most of the time haha.

Later means after a week or could be a month. ^_^

 

[K I N J A Z]

wala na bang mas broad pa sa vocabulary nyo

 

[10reason]

Hi, Thanks! Yours, too.

try natin collaboration pag may free time ka mam

 

[Somnolent]

try natin collaboration pag may free time ka mam

Sure! I would love that. Send prompts anytime soon 'coz i'm lost for words

 

[10reason]

Sure! I would love that. Send prompts anytime soon 'coz i'm lost for words

think of a concept that will be fit to our words, I would love to know your ideas

 

[Somnolent]

wala na bang mas broad pa sa vocabulary nyo

Sus! Ikaw pa ba? E senpai kita! Lmao