[XX='jncndlcpa, c: 1178029, m: 1832526'][/XX] Wow. Thanks for noticing them.
Sa one, nakalimutan ko lagyan ng "s". Dapat kasi yan, "They're the
whys the renovation." Medyo pangit pakinggan pero that is grammatically correct.
Sa two, siguro gawin ko nalang "horny-handed" para hindi confusing.
Haha.
Sa three, siguro I'll leave the "squiny" na ganun na lang para kunwari ni revive nung character yung word tsaka para may sense of ownership sa kanyang personality.
Sa four, yung "ambulonecrophobia" nabasa ko lang yan sa "Grandiloquent Word of the Day" sa Facebook. Kung hindi talaga yan siya acceptable or existing na word. I'll leave it nalang to Eric's judgment para maging natural yung pagkakamali niya. Anyway, kinoreksyon naman ni Raz si Eric by saying, "The latter should be kinemortophobia", and his acceptance to the newly-discovered word from Eric will inject a sense of humanity sa character niya na natural sa mga tao na minsan kung ano ang sinasabi sa atin ng iba ay pinaniniwalaan natin.
Hehe.
Hope it ties them all up. I really appreciate your analytic thinking.
Ang ganda siguro pag nakakausap kita in person.