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Ilalagay kolang po ss Thesis proposal sa problem po. Salamat.

  • All the information they collect/save they record it in a logbook. Which is not good because what if they lost the book all the information as well are lost.
  • They can't generate a printed receipt. At mahirap to pag dating sa monthly payment baka kase magkalituhan kaya mas maganda kung may hawak na resibo din yung customers.
  • hussle on selling lot because manually they go to the area to see if it's available or not.

Hindi po kase ako convince sa Quilbot. Salamat po ng marami.
 

RylD

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  • All the information that are collected is recorded in a logbook. The downside of this is, what if they lost the book or an accident happened and the book was burned or water was poured on it. Part or all of the information in the logbook might be recover.
  • They (Or much better if "It" since it is a thing?) can't generate a printed receipt. At mahirap to pag dating sa monthly payment baka kase magkalituhan kaya mas maganda kung may hawak na resibo din yung customers.
  • hussle on selling lot because manually they go to the area to see if it's available or not. // Di ko po magets yung thought dito if maeelaborate baka may masuggest ako.
 
  • All the information that are collected is recorded in a logbook. The downside of this is, what if they lost the book or an accident happened and the book was burned or water was poured on it. Part or all of the information in the logbook might be recover.
  • They (Or much better if "It" since it is a thing?) can't generate a printed receipt. At mahirap to pag dating sa monthly payment baka kase magkalituhan kaya mas maganda kung may hawak na resibo din yung customers.
  • hussle on selling lot because manually they go to the area to see if it's available or not. // Di ko po magets yung thought dito if maeelaborate baka may masuggest ako.
Uy! Thank you po! Yung pang 3 po kase halimbawa po may gustong tumingin at bumili ng lupa po tapos po sa system po na gagawin namin lalagyan po ng mapping para doon po makikita at makakapamili yung customer oara makita po doon kung anong lot po ang available pa.

Ganun po.
 

RylD

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Uy! Thank you po! Yung pang 3 po kase halimbawa po may gustong tumingin at bumili ng lupa po tapos po sa system po na gagawin namin lalagyan po ng mapping para doon po makikita at makakapamili yung customer oara makita po doon kung anong lot po ang available pa.

Ganun po.
Hassle po yung word ts. Since thesis siya mas ok na din na formal and mas ok ata irephrase mo completely yung 3rd sentence like;
- It would be more troublesome for the customer to check the lot personally to see if it is still available or not. (Parang may kulang pa din tong sentence na to since di ko po gets tlaga yung pinaka thought. Somehow disagree din po ko sa part na to kasi if ako bibili ng lupa mas gusto ko din makita personally yung lot, kaya baka may hindi ako na gets sa gusto mo talga sabihin.)
 
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Hassle po yung word ts. Since thesis siya mas ok na din na formal and mas ok ata irephrase mo completely yung 3rd sentence like;
- It would be more troublesome for the customer to check the lot personally to see if it is still available or not. (Parang may kulang pa din tong sentence na to since di ko po gets tlaga yung pinaka thought. Somehow disagree din po ko sa part na to kasi if ako bibili ng lupa mas gusto ko din makita personally yung lot, kaya baka may hindi ako na gets sa gusto mo talga sabihin.)
Titingnan padin naman po sir yung lupa. Pero sa una po para po makita yung mga bakanteng lupa po bago po puntahan kase po yung cemetery po is nasa paanan po sya ng bundok. Sa baba po wala pong view then sa medyo taas po may view po.

Ganun po sir. Thank you po pala sapag suggest po. 🙏 Baka po maayos nyopo yung pang 3. Thank you po.
 
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